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Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Stuck

So I have never really understood poetry that much but I wrote my first real little poem and I now kind of understand it better.



                                                               Day after day,
                                                            I sit here thinking,
                                                                 wondering,
                                                    Will I always be stuck here,
                                                           in this everyday life?
                                                         So boring it is here,
                                             I am surrounded by so many people,
                                                            yet I am so alone,
                                                               I want to go,
                                                           I want to be free,
                                                                     stuck,
                                                                   so stuck,
                                                                  I scream,
                                                                     I cry,
                                                             I turn on a light,
                                                                     I sit,
                                                                   I read,
                                                             I finally escape.






    ok let me know what you think???????????


3 comments:

  1. I like it a lot. But you know that.:D

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  2. I think that you should write more poems!! Have you seen any that your Mom has written? Gma

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  3. :) I might just have to write some more than!
    no I havnt read anything that shes written,but I should!

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