So I have never really understood poetry that much but I wrote my first real little poem and I now kind of understand it better.
Day after day,
I sit here thinking,
wondering,
Will I always be stuck here,
in this everyday life?
So boring it is here,
I am surrounded by so many people,
yet I am so alone,
I want to go,
I want to be free,
stuck,
so stuck,
I scream,
I cry,
I turn on a light,
I sit,
I read,
I finally escape.
ok let me know what you think???????????

I like it a lot. But you know that.:D
ReplyDeleteI think that you should write more poems!! Have you seen any that your Mom has written? Gma
ReplyDelete:) I might just have to write some more than!
ReplyDeleteno I havnt read anything that shes written,but I should!